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PostSubject: [Comments] Closer to Death.   Thu Sep 24, 2009 5:45 am

Comments on the thwarting, sporadically updated, sick fanfiction 'Closer to Death'.

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PostSubject: Re: [Comments] Closer to Death.   Thu Sep 24, 2009 7:58 am

even you r evil writer
and i know it will be sad ending but i can git engh for your stories....
because you r soo briliant
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PostSubject: Re: [Comments] Closer to Death.   Thu Sep 24, 2009 8:11 am

I can't resist your stories :cheers:

i think it will be disappointed, but i'm going to read it till the end and.

thanks for this new story. :bounce:
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PostSubject: Re: [Comments] Closer to Death.   Thu Sep 24, 2009 11:48 am

Trice, you just amused me with your fanfic... Your ideas are just too out of the box but captures attention with the words you used. The first 7 lines keeps me thinking once again what kind of story will it be. Definitely not something which will happen to Inoue Mao and Matsumoto Jun in real life. Married Inoue Mao? Somehow i have a feeling the married Inoue Mao is not married to Matsumoto Jun. :( oh well, whether it will be happy ending or not, will still look forward to it even though i personally would prefer happy ending stories. (but i supposed, what we readers hope for won't affect how your story will flow. hehe) looking forward to the first chapter of this new fanfic of yours as well as "Six Months" though you mentioned not to have high hopes on that.
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PostSubject: Re: [Comments] Closer to Death.   Thu Sep 24, 2009 12:18 pm

OMG!!! :shock: :shock: :shock:
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PostSubject: Re: [Comments] Closer to Death.   Thu Sep 24, 2009 4:11 pm

hmmm...
now a dark fic... ;)
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PostSubject: Re: [Comments] Closer to Death.   Fri Sep 25, 2009 5:04 am

@nareeman: thanks for still reading though I can be a pain in the ass XDDDDD
@dinay: We shouldn't start reading a story, being a little biased right? .... (considering the reputation I got, I guess it's unavoidable... ROFLMAOOOOO XD)
@frenzlove: There's no box in my mind, I guess. XD I'm working on Six Months right now and wrote 400 words this evening edit: it's 1000 words now... (Can I have a reward-cookie? XD) If I can somehow write another 5 pages and have the plot of the month being settled, I'd be a very happy fanfic writer. XD
@rie: =D
@jmc_iuqcaj: Yup. Tryin' everything. I'd like to expand my view a little and not be stuck in only one category. I assure you I have plans for a comical one. Only I'm putting it in the fridge for a while. I'm concentrating on Six Month and something else ;)


Thanks for commenting though I only posted like 7 sentences. XD

(Oh, I'll be adding some warnings: strong language, violence, mild ecchiness (but not my hentai level now... You'll know what M is for me once I write an M fic. lol! lol! )

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PostSubject: Re: [Comments] Closer to Death.   Sun Sep 27, 2009 7:51 am

Ok, so Mao is married, but not with Jun...

I have a bad feeling that Jun is THE MURDERER...I don't know why...

Mao, she's crazy to agree about all that...for her career...i'm afraid for her...the murderer seems to be very dangerous, a psychopath...


update soon please, and thanks for this long chapter :D
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PostSubject: Re: [Comments] Closer to Death.   Sun Sep 27, 2009 11:24 am

"I am ...." whooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo :shock: :shock:

please please update sooooon
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PostSubject: Re: [Comments] Closer to Death.   Sun Sep 27, 2009 11:41 am

Woooo.... The first chapter is up.... Saw that you were online this morning and i thought you might be updating Six Months which turns out to be this fanfic instead. doesn't matter anyway so long as there's something for me to read. hehe. Who is the man at the last part of the chapter? Matsumoto Jun? Curious to know what's the name of Mao's husband. Thanks for the update and hope that something will be put up for "Six Months" too. hehe.
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PostSubject: Re: [Comments] Closer to Death.   Sun Sep 27, 2009 12:59 pm

im a bit confused.. lol
like you said i hope in the coming chapters all will be cleared..

and ecchi? i never thought you would include something like that in this pretty dark fic.. haha!
i do hope that the ecchi parts would be mao with jun.. XD
i just wanna ask, is there even going to be a bit of romance in this? none, right?

i feel like im in for quite a ride with this fic!! better hold on tight! ;)
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PostSubject: Re: [Comments] Closer to Death.   Sun Sep 27, 2009 7:16 pm

@dinay: Will your assumptions be correct or not? Well... I know the answer already XD
@nareeman: Will do my best. Though this fic is a real 'gottahavetherightmoodtowriteit' kind. xD
@frenzlove: There are times, I come on LSS and do... nothing. LMAO XD
@rie: yohohohoooo~ I'll jut say 'be patient and read' XD

Thanks for commenting though it's not a main-stream fanfic (I guess). ^^

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PostSubject: Re: [Comments] Closer to Death.   Sun Sep 27, 2009 7:27 pm

hmmmm....
im a bit confused as well...
so many mysteries, i hope we will see a clear picture soon... hehe...
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